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There were days where Jack followed humans around.

Sometimes, it was because he was curious.

Sometimes, it was because of his guardian duties.

This time, it was for a reason he could not fully grasp.

He thought about asking the others about it, but decided against it.

He was afraid they would not understand.

So, he pondered what it could be on his own.

He was definitely curious.

It was not, however, part of his duties to watch this human.

After all, this person was not a child.

Standing on a rooftop, gripping his staff, he smiled to himself.

"Wind, you know where to take me."

The wind came and within moments, he flew.

He turned in the air, creating snowballs for the children below.

He laughed as he witnessed snow fights, and even participated in them a little.

Though, as he neared his true destination, he flew slower.

He sat on the same tree branch that he always sat on when he came here.

His expression became less mischievous as he waited in his spot.

Then, after a minute or two, the human appeared.

Jack's expression became pensive, excited, and full of awe, all at the same time.

He had never taken to a human so much before.

He watched them sit on their usual bench, and pull out their usual notebook.

The human wrote, and Jack observed.

A few minutes later, the person rubbed their hands together and shivered.

"You made today extra cold, Jack Frost."

He didn't know if she was serious when she said it, but a smile instantly came to him.

The way this human said his name was different.

The way they said it made him happy.

He made snowflakes, and blew them downwards.

He watched as the human beamed at them in delight.

On the inside, Jack wanted to make her happy.

He also desperately wished for her to truly believe.
So I saw Rise of the Guardians yesterday, and like most other girls that fangirl over Jack Frost, proceeded to write fan fiction.

I really enjoyed the part of the film where they showed his past memories. I used that as inspiration for this piece.

If I figure out how to progress this story, I might post more. C:

Enjoy!
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
I watched it a long time ago...

I HAVE NOT YET WRITTEN ANYTHING ABOUT IT, ALTHOUGH I DID FANGIRL OVER JACK FROST!!!

I keep trying to get my family to watch it with me again...
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bohneracheld Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea, maybe he reaches out to her I every way and makes a desperate bargain with the man in the moon so she can see him!
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Fire-star-14 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
Please continue this u r doing a great job on this so far;p
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Dragonempress123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful!
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KITTEN-DEMON Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
o3o
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love itttttttttttttttttt
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Jimplayer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student Artist
I so love it
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icono3oblinkplz::iconsaysplz::Can you make more please????
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yeah,I forgot.
You get a Len-baby and a insta-fave.
:iconcutelenplz::iconsaysplz::YAY
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harbourshark Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
i like this very creative keep it up
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katerry928 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student Artist
please make more this is good your good writer
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DannielleFrost Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
O-M-G aaaaaaa soo beautiful sweatheart, can u do other, please? c:
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconmoarplz:
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ShadowBunnyIce Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aww...it's the last line that got me...more please!
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autumnbreezeROTG Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese make more :(
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Meg-Williams Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
More please!!
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Marshallxmarci Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwe!!! this was beautiful. i loved it!
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FairyBishop Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow! more, please!
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2pfemitaly Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aw <3 this is great, almost thought it was a poem when i was browsing deviatart! well done you!
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TobuscusLover Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
kb ]xjznz,mnxz I lost my ability to type just then, because this is so freaking awesome AND OH MY GOD KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Iceheart1997 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
PLEEEEZE do!! I love this! How it's from 3rd person/Jacks point of view.
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Candi-Rhodes Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved it ^^
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
But I believe in you Jack Overland Frost!!! But stupid me... To not notice him.. Ò_Ó
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iStrawberryLove Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh god... The last line.. That is a nice corner.. I think i'll go water it now.. D:

Oh.. My poor Jack..
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Godessia Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! I want to read more!! :D
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Shadamybelong Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
i love the frost , its so pretty , and fluffy . much like this story xxxox ^^ :iconmerrychristmasplz:
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Kyuubi-Hime360 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
*Is crouched on your lap, staring down at you with a creepy grin* I need more of this... fluffy angst you write.
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jackiefrost123 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
I think the girl is jack's sister!
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Seung-Hyun Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
If you're referring to the sister that he had in the movie, that's not what I had in mind when writing this.
I meant for the girl to be a female that Jack has taken a liking to. I want female readers to be able to imagine themselves in this.
The girl has no relation to Jack.
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Zaphaud Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
dawwww, so cute~
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Seung-Hyun Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Thank you very much! :)
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Zaphaud Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Not a problem~ ^^
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fangirlinghetalia849 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
I cried... ;n; BUT I'M A BELIEVER SO IT'S OK (great story btw)
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Seung-Hyun Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
It makes me happy to know that my writing appeals to you in such a way. Thank you for commenting <3
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RikuTsumi Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
I loved it! Wonderful fanfic!
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Seung-Hyun Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it :D
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RikuTsumi Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
You're very welcome
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SpiritOfTheDog Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
I'm not usually a fan of fanfiction, but this is really, really good! You really captured Jack's personality. I just joined Deviantart in hopes of catching more of the story :)
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Seung-Hyun Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Aw, thanks for taking the time to comment! I do my best when writing, and it's nice to hear that readers like it.

Did you really? AHHH. I will do my best to continue this soon ;A;
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The-phoenix-Miya Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
please write more to this. I'm already loving it
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Seung-Hyun Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Thank you for your support. I am doing my best to figure out how to continue. :)
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The-phoenix-Miya Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
you're welcome. Let me know if you need any help coming up with ideas
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AutobotChrome Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
WE BELIEVE!!! T_T
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Seung-Hyun Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Yes! T_T
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AutobotChrome Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
he dosnt think I believe... cuz it hasnt snowed in texas for two years... XD
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Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know! As much as I love Jack, he needs to visit us Texans some more!
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AutobotChrome Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
yes! and he did for a little bit where I am. :D
it snowed a bit but then it turned to mud... :(
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Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww... I live at the Capitol, I haven't seen snow for around 4-5 years :( I even went to New York and didn't see any snow! And me, being used to warm weather, froze my but off.
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AutobotChrome Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
awww... :( I am sorry... Snow is just so rare around her, isnt it? you should head out into the country and see if it snows then! cuz I am in a small town in nowhere and that probably why we cant get mail sent to our house. :I we dont exist. XD
lol, keep your butt! you need it!
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Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It was cold and I didn't even have wi-fi! But seeing relatives is fun, it was worth it, I got an iPad. *goes and retrieves butt* You do to exist! Don't be Canada!
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